As for the bad things, I hated Mac. What an annoying character! It was not just that she was more worried about her attire than her life, but everything about her showed she was incredibly stupid. Fortunately, a friend of mine told me she improves as the story goes on, so there's hope for her. Also, the monsters were often childishly described, which bothered me a little, but now I think thats just because Mac describes them and she's too childish.Other than that, I liked the book, it was very easy to read, the story was quite engaging, I'm curious about where this is going so I'll go read the next one :)
